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Does Music Help You Learn Or Does It Distract You

In my opinion, for other people it will distract them because, when people puts songs on and their favourite song comes up they will start singing  and that annoy’s me. I want to listen to music when I work but other people will start talking and I wouldn’t get to hear properly.

First Opinion: Why Does People Love Music?

People loves music because the lovely beats and it makes them dance. Why does people start talking?, it’s because music cheers us up and it makes us go crazy, by dancing and singing when you’re really meant to do your work.I love music and I really want to hear them during class time but then people will go crazy and it will distract you by the loud sounds around the classroom.Last time when I was writing with music on, I ended up writing the lyrics of the song in my book when I was meant to write things about my holidays.

Second Opinion: Types of music

When people puts their favourite song on, other people won’t like it and they will start moaning about “ohh I hate this song I don’t like this, choose a different song”.Imagine if that person doesn’t even like any of the songs that we put on.I think it’s fair for any of us to put any song we want just not inappropriate.

Last Opinion

When someone's favourite music comes up,they will start singing.People doesn’t like it when other people sings while the music is going because some voices are bad and we want to hear the songs.What’s the point of putting music on if other people will start talking and not doing their work,it would be better if we’re quiet and listening to the lovely music even know if you don’t like it.

So that is why I wouldn’t put music on.

It’s not the music that distracts you it’s actually the people.I love music,it’s my life. It helps me feel better and confident and it also cheers us up.